Not that you should necessarily take writing-life advice from me. Perhaps you ought to listen to Jo Rowling and spend seven years plotting. But this it the irrational, backward way I start a new story.
1. I have a tiny idea. Teenaged wards of the state in hospice care. That’s nowhere near a full-blown idea, let alone a plot, but it’s enough. Just a tiny idea is all I need. But I have to love it, have to want it.
2. Characters. Whatever-this-is-going-to-be is going to be nothing without a handful of characters. I start with names and photos, which I find by scouring the internet until angels start singing. Again, this seems backward, doesn’t it?
Yes, I think. Her name will be Macaulay, and she will go by Mack. And this will be her.
That’s fascinating, I think. She has purple hair. I didn’t know that. Now I do.
Repeat this process for the others. Meanwhile, little snippets of their conversation start to play out in my mind, and I write them down. Save them for later.
3. Research– but only a little bit. There will probably be a lot more research to come, and a lot of things will change, so I don’t want to put too much time into this upfront, nor do I want to be too committed to what I learn. So I poke around and find what these teenagers in hospice care might be dying from. I talk to my friends who work in the medical field and in hospice care, and I learn a little bit. This keeps making the characters more and more real in my head. I keep thinking of their conversations, and I keep jotting them down.
4. Sink or swim. I dive in and write a terrible first draft, reminding myself every ten minutes that it is only a first draft and that first drafts are, by nature, going to be terrible. I remind myself that I will revise the hell out of it later, but that there is nothing to revise until it is written.
5. I learn the story as I go. I take that handful of characters I’ve created, and I put them in my hands, shake them up and then toss them into a room– or, you know, a hospice center– together and see what happens. I’m as fascinated to find out what they’re planning as the next person is.
6. Later on, I revise. Only after it’s written do I really understand what I was trying to say with the story– and, let’s be honest, it probably wasn’t me trying to say anything.
Your turn. How do you start a story? Do you plan and plot, or do you just dive in? Where do you begin?
P.S. I really did write Mack’s story about living and dying in hospice with other teenagers. I’m submitting it to a contest this month, where I assume nothing will happen. Once nothing happens, I’ll probably share it on my blog or over on Crux.
P.P.S. I won the contest.
P.P.P.S. Read “Covered Up Our Names” here.
Funny, I do the exact same thing! The ideas just flesh themselves out backwards. I do a bit of story plotting after I’ve had fun with the basics though. Most of my plotting actually comes about as a side effect of developing character backstories, and that makes my stories really convoluted haha. Thanks for sharing!
Thanks for sharing your process, Jackie. I don’t write fiction anymore. I’m more of a “just start writing” but I usually have a idea about what I want to write. Sometimes the beginning of a piece will come together in my thoughts as I’m kind of rolling things around in my head. Sometimes a complete first paragraph comes. Then I go from there.
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Was talking about some of these things with a book club (that just read Truest and invited me to join them for discussion) this week. Thought I’d repost. Tell me about how start a story.
Are we able to read your story, Jackie? It’s such an interesting setting.
Hi Carol! Thanks! Yes, you absolutely can. It’s posted at http://hungermtn.org/covered-up-our-names-young-adult-fiction/